发布日期：2019-05-05
在美国大媒体发新闻稿，美国编辑提出修改建议后，如何沟通解决改稿问题（下）
在美国大媒体发新闻稿，美国编辑提出修改建议后，如何沟通解决改稿问题（下）
发布日期：2023-05-01 10:15
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美国编辑对具体段落的完整修改案例如下，以此，可以了解修改思路和具体处理办法。其实通常改动都不大，很多只是微调。
Revised for readability and to omit opinion:
Original:
Based on the unique culture and tourism resources of Wuhan, Hubei Province, this Contest selected over 30 high-quality bloggers among 100 bloggers who have high attention and extensive influence in the fields of parent-child relationship, photography, food, humanities and art, and deeply experienced the cultural and historical features of Wuhan.
Based on the unique culture and tourism resources of Wuhan, Hubei Province, this Contest selected over 30 high-quality bloggers among 100 bloggers who have high attention and extensive influence in the fields of parent-child relationship, photography, food, humanities and art, and deeply experienced the cultural and historical features of Wuhan.
Revised:
Based on the culture and tourism resources of Wuhan, Hubei Province, this contest selected over 30 bloggers among 100 bloggers who have wide influence and large audiences in the fields of parent-child relationship, photography, food, humanities and art, while also representing deep lived experience with the cultural and historical features of Wuhan.
Based on the culture and tourism resources of Wuhan, Hubei Province, this contest selected over 30 bloggers among 100 bloggers who have wide influence and large audiences in the fields of parent-child relationship, photography, food, humanities and art, while also representing deep lived experience with the cultural and historical features of Wuhan.
Revised for readability:
Original:
During the contest, a team of experts composed of national first-class directors and outstanding China young film directors selected and commented on the short videos, and selected five excellent works:
During the contest, a team of experts composed of national first-class directors and outstanding China young film directors selected and commented on the short videos, and selected five excellent works:
Revised:
During the contest, a team of experts composed of national first-class directors and outstanding young China film directors commented on the short videos and selected five excellent works in the following categories:
During the contest, a team of experts composed of national first-class directors and outstanding young China film directors commented on the short videos and selected five excellent works in the following categories:
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